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1.the figures/statistics show (that)... 数据(字)表明...
2.the tree diagram reveals how... 该树型图向我们揭示了如何...
3.the data/statistics show (that)... 该数据(字)可以这样理解...
4.the data/statistics/figures lead us to the conclusion that... 这些数据资料令我们得出结论...
5.as is shown/demonstrated/exhibited in the diagram/graph/chart/table... 如图所示...
雅思写作表原因的句子：
(1). cause-effect (较常用) ：XXX lead to / bring about / result in/ account for … (一个句子/shared the same tendency)， therefore / thus / hence / as a result / consequently / (and) so …
(2). effect-cause (较常用)
XXX be caused by / result from / be the result of / be the effect of / be the consequence of … (一个句子/shared the same tendency)，because …
it is adj. that …
it is unimaginable that …
it is undeniable that …
it is interesting to discover that …
雅思写作开头部分
This graph/pie chart/table/bar chart reflects the (rate/percentage/proportion/number …) of (对象) in(place/country)from …to…
According to the figure ， it is not surpring findings that there was/were 总体趋势的'描述(the overall trend tended to indicate…/the general trend is…/其他)
雅思写作结尾部分
In conclude ， the overall trend tended to illustrate ……during this xx-year period
对未来的表述以及转换词
…is projected to…… as to
…is expected to…… as for
…is forcasted to …… …is estimated to…
Task：Some people argue that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animals and birds.To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Sample answer：
In recent years, animal protection has become an issue of concern. People take different attitudes towards the increasing attention and expenditure on wildlife conservation. Some people suggest that the spending should be redirected to helping other fields in society. I agree with the view that the investment in wildlife protection is not worthwhile.
Animals, as a key component of the whole food chain, have a profound impact on the sustainability of an ecosystem. As we known, every kind of animals plays an important role in natural balance. For instance, the demise of any species will lead to the growth or decline of other species. In some extreme cases, some species may at the verge of extinction such as Dodo bird. If people did not take actions to protect wildlife as soon as possible, we humans would be affected in the end.
However, there are more issues that we need to focus in our society rather than protecting animals. In current social context, the primary task is still to improve living standards since there are many people living under the poverty line. Only when people are in a good living condition, can they pay attention to other social problems. Besides, technology and education are another two aspects of governments to concern. These two industries accelerate the development of society, which will provide a better protection for wildlife in turn.
In conclusion, although the animal is a significant part of ecosystem, it is better for governments to invest more finance and resources in other social problems.
You recently met a manager from a new company that opened in your town. After the meeting, he wrote to you, offering you a job in this new company. However, you want to stay in your present job. Write a letter to the manager, and include: thanks him for the offer, explain why you want to stay in the present job, recommend a friend to take the job in the new company.
Rewritten Sample writing:
My sincere apologies for the delay in my response, as I wished to consider your offer in detail.
First, I wish to express my gratitude for your generous offer, which was important to me, nevertheless after consideration I believe that I would prefer to stay in my current position.
As a structural engineer, the design of economical residential buildings to accommodate general people was a dream of my childhood, and presently I am very fortunate that I am able to fulfill my dreams. As a result, it would be my intention to remain with my present work.
At the same time, and this may be of interest to you, I would like to recommend a friend, Bob Gillett, who was a colleague of mine, to ap*** for the position that you offered me. He is specialized in environmental engineering and has ten years’ working experience. I believe he would be the perfect candidate for your company. I have also spoken with him in brief and you can contact him directly on 0432783157. I am sure he would be pleased to hear from you.
Thank you once more for your kind consideration and with best wishes.
The two graphs show the main sources of energy in the USA in the 1980s and the 1990s.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the changes which occurred.
Sample Answer:
The given pie charts shows data on the main energy sources in the United States of America for two decades. As is presented in the pie charts, oil was the main energy source for the USA both on 80s and 90s.
According to the given data, oil was the main energy source in the USA which was 42% in 1980. The second largest energy source in this decade was the natural gas which supplied 26% of total energy in the same period. Then coal supplied more than 20 percent energy demand in USA while hydroelectric power and Nuclear power both supplied 5% of the total energy.
In the next decade, the Nuclear power produced one tenth of total energy demand and that was almost double that it was in the previous decade. The hydroelectric power as an energy source remained unchanged as it provided 5% of total energy demand in this decade also. The two other main sources for energy in the USA remained almost unchanged in this decade and those two sources were Coal and Natural Gas. Finally the use of oil as an energy sources reduced to 33%, which is almost 10% less than the previous decade, but remained the largest source albeit the reduction in this 90s decade.
In summary, the use of oil and coal had reduced and their places as energy sources were replaced by the use of Nuclear power in the USA.
separate line graphs answer
题目：
The first chart below gives information about the money spent by British parents on their children’s sports between 2008 and 2014. The second chart shows the number of children who participated in three sports in Britain over the same time period.
范文：
Here's my full answer:
The line graphs show the average monthly amount that parents in Britain spent on their children’s sporting activities and the number of British children who took part in three different sports from 2008 to 2014.
It is clear that parents spent more money each year on their children’s participation in sports over the six-year period. In terms of the number of children taking part, football was significantly more popular than athletics and swimming.
In 2008, British parents spent an average of around £20 per month on their children’s sporting activities. Parents’ spending on children’s sports increased gradually over the following six years, and by 2014 the average monthly amount had risen to just over £30.
Looking at participation numbers, in 2008 approximately 8 million British children played football, while only 2 million children were enrolled in swimming clubs and less than 1 million practised athletics. The figures for football participation remained relatively stable over the following 6 years. By contrast, participation in swimming almost doubled, to nearly 4 million children, and there was a near fivefold increase in the number of children doing athletics.
'waste graph' answer
范文：
The line graph compares three companies in terms of their waste output between the years 2000 and 2015.
It is clear that there were significant changes in the amounts of waste produced by all three companies shown on the graph. While companies A and B saw waste output fall over the 15-year period, the amount of waste produced by company C increased considerably.
In 2000, company A produced 12 tonnes of waste, while companies B and C produced around 8 tonnes and 4 tonnes of waste material respectively. Over the following 5 years, the waste output of companies B and C rose by around 2 tonnes, but the figure for company A fell by approximately 1 tonne.
From 2005 to 2015, company A cut waste production by roughly 3 tonnes, and company B reduced its waste by around 7 tonnes. By contrast, company C saw an increase in waste production of approximately 4 tonnes over the same 10-year period. By 2015, company C’s waste output had risen to 10 tonnes, while the respective amounts of waste from companies A and B had dropped to 8 tonnes and only 3 tonnes.
(192 words, band 9)
pie charts report
题目;
The charts below show the results of a questionnaire that asked visitors to the Parkway Hotel how they rated the hotel's customer service. The same questionnaire was given to 100 guests in the years 2005 and 2010.
范文：
The pie charts compare visitors’ responses to a survey about customer service at the Parkway Hotel in 2005 and in 2010.
It is clear that overall customer satisfaction increased considerably from 2005 to 2010. While most hotel guests rated customer service as satisfactory or poor in 2005, a clear majority described the hotel’s service as good or excellent in 2010.
Looking at the positive responses first, in 2005 only 5% of the hotel’s visitors rated its customer service as excellent, but this figure rose to 28% in 2010. Furthermore, while only 14% of guests described customer service in the hotel as good in 2005, almost three times as many people gave this rating five years later.
With regard to negative feedback, the proportion of guests who considered the hotel’s customer service to be poor fell from 21% in 2005 to only 12% in 2010. Similarly, the proportion of people who thought customer service was very poor dropped from 15% to only 4% over the 5-year period. Finally, a fall in the number of ‘satisfactory’ ratings in 2010 reflects the fact that more people gave positive responses to the survey in that year.
(193 words, band 9)
——雅思写作饼图小作文满分(五)份
With the development of cities, more and more new buildings are appearing in the city. Some people claim that the government should ensure all the new buildings should be built in traditional styles. For me, I do not agree with this suggestion.
Undoubtedly, the old buildings can reflect our traditional culture and should be protected and built. They are the houses where the ancient people lived. By appreciating these old buildings, we can have a better understanding of our ancient culture and history.
However, I do not agree that all the new buildings should be built in traditional styles. First of all, a city’s culture identity consists of the past culture and the modern culture. While past culture can be represented by the traditional buildings, modern culture should be reflected by modern buildings. If all the new buildings are built in traditional styles, the modern culture may be lost in the city. Secondly, the style of the new building should be decided by a lot of factors such as location, function, and so on. For instance, it is impossible for us to build a modern shopping mall into traditional style, because there are a lot of famous brands inside. Thirdly, modern buildings can accommodate more people than traditional buildings, which can meet the increasing population.
Therefore, I agree that we should build some old buildings, but we should not build all the buildings into traditional styles. We should consider a lot of aspects before we make the final decision.
As a result of constant media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities, and those at the top are paid huge salaries. Just like movie stars, they live extravagantlifestyles with huge houses and cars.
Many people find their rewards unfair, especially when comparing these super salaries with those of top surgeons or research scientists, or even leading politicians who have the responsibilityof governing the country. However, sports salaries are not determined by considering the contribution to society a person makes, or the level of responsibility he or she holds. Instead, they reflect the public popularity of sport in general and the level of public support that successful stars can generate. So the notion of ‘fairness’ is not the issue.
Those who feel that sports stars’ salaries are justified might argue that the number of professionals with real talent are very few, and the money is a recognition of the skills and dedication a person needs to be successful. Competition is constant and a player is tested every time they perform. in their relatively short career. The pressure from the media is intense and there is little privacy out of the spotlight. So all of thesefactors may justify the huge earnings.
Personally, I think that the amount of money such sports stars make is more justified than the huge earnings of movie stars, but at the same time, it indicatesthat our society places more value on sport than on more essential professions and achievements.
译文
在媒体不断地推波助澜下，我国的许多职业运动员已成为了明星和名人。那些顶尖的运动员收入颇丰。像一些电影明星一样，他(她)们也是香车豪宅，生活极为奢华。
许多人觉得与那些挣高薪的顶级外科医生，从事研究的科学家或有管理国家责任的**相比，他(她)们的回报极为不公。然而，运动员的薪水并不是由一个人对社会所做出的贡献或者其责任水*所决定。相反，它们反映的是从整体上来说体育运动在大众中的普及性以及那些成功的体育明星对促进公众对运动的支持所做出的贡献。所以，“公*”的概念并不是问题关键之所在。
那些认为体育明星拿高薪无可厚非的人争辩说那些有天赋的体育运动员实属凤毛麟角，高薪是对他(她)们娴熟技能和通往成功之路所付出努力的承认。竞争持续不断，运动员在他(她)们相对较短的运动生涯中迎接每次检验。来自于媒体的压力令人窒息，而且他(她)们必须生活在镁光灯下，没有隐私。这一切都证明了他(她)们高薪得之无愧。
在我个人看来，比起电影明星的高薪，体育明星的高薪更受之无愧。但与此同时，该现象也显得出我们的社会更关注体育而非其它一些更重要的领域和成就。
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The advancement of modern technology is making peoples life more comfortable and at the same time less human. To those who enjoy the benefits of technology, there is no better time to be alive than now, but to others life has been increasingly complex and stressful. The issue is whether such new technological machines as computers and the Internet would be our servants forever or eventually could become our masters.
All kinds of inventions made possible by technology are designed to be the slaves of human beings, if human beings are not to be slaved by machines. Once upon a time, we were plain people, but that was before we began having relationships with technological systems. By getting involved with computerized machines, we could not help changing the way we live and the way we work, for better or for worse It can be realized that life is more complex because much of modern technology is not born to meet primary human needs, and many unnecessary inventions are producing negative effects on a living style that used to be relatively simple. Thus, there is an overwhelming feeling of complexity in the sense that machines act like humans and humans act like machines. Now that intelligent machines such as robots are widely applied to take the place of human beings because they are capable of doing many useful jobs, although making many people joblesss. Those who cannot work with computers are disadvantaged and therefore helpless while the traditional skills and simple ways of life are fading away, never to return again.
Sample answer：
Over the past century, science and technology has been developing unprecedentedly and changing every aspect of people's lives. In my point of view, technology brings about higher efficiency and greater convenience,even though it causes confusion and disorder under some circumstances.
The benefits of modern technologies are multiple. Automation is widely used on the assembly line, setting free millions of people from the arduous and repetitive work.Thanks to the widespread use of the Internet, people have easier access to information than ever before. Instead of going to the library to consult reference books,they can acquire any information they want via the Internet. Moreover,emails and mobile phones enable people to stay in touch more conveniently and efficiently, compared with the old days when they had to go to the post office or visit others in person.
Despite the above-mentioned benefits,we cannot deny the fact that technology may lead to complexity and inconvenience in some cases. For instance,some old people find it difficult to use public facilities equipped with electronic-devices. However, this issue can be addressed with clear instructions provided. Another example is cyber fraud,which is difficult to prevent as the false information can spread very fast on the web.Those who get deceived may complain that the virtual space generates more crimes.
Overall,there is no denying that some problems and troubles may occur When various new technologies are applied to people's lives. However, returning to a simple life without technology is not a solution and I believe a better future of mankind lies with the further progress of science and technology.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m writing in response to the advertisement you placed in Shanghai Daily for the position of overseas mechanical engineer on Mon. Feb.23.
I would like to ap*** for this post. I graduated with a Master’s degree in Machine-Building and Electronics Industries in Tsinghua University in 1999 and began my career in Zhongshan ABB Company as a young mechanical engineer. In 20XX, I was promoted to be the chief engineer, taking charge of the projects in Southeast Asia. I have been seeking for chances overseas in my majored domain in the hope that I can develop my potential further.
If possible, I would like to choose a mechanical company with good reputation located in Chicago. I would also prefer small private companies which allow me to enjoy a larger space of promotion.
The reason I made the decision above is that my husband has recently been relocated to Chicago by his company and I am, therefore, seeking a position in the same area in Chicago.
I have enclosed my resume that outlines in detail my qualifications and experience as well as an open letter of recommendation from my former employer.
Please give me a feedback at your earliest convenience if my qualifications meet your requirements.
I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Lucy Liu
——雅思考试写作优秀优选【5】份
People living in big cities face problems; government should encourage people to move to small towns. What are these problems? Do you agree government should encourage people to move to small towns?生活在大城市的人面临许多问题，**应该鼓励人们搬到小城镇。请问这些问题是什么?你认为**应该鼓励人们搬去小城镇吗?
People who want a modern life style, with a focus on luxury, convenience and accessibility, will choose city life. Advanced technological appliances to better job opportunities, better wages and extensive product ranges are some of the attractions of city life. But nowadays people living in big cities face a variety of issues. Some citizens advocate that government should encourage people to move to small towns as population density in cities increases, it leads to overcrowding.
In 2007 the United Nations estimated the total world population at 6.6 billion were living in urban areas. Roughly 80 percent of the U.S. population, for example, lives in urban areas. This happens because the demand for housing is more than the sup*** of housing.
Moreover, increased movement of people from rural to urban areas puts a strain on the city's infrastracfture. As more people join the commuter rush each day, roads and freeways become crowded. New construction adds to the chaos as it struggles to keep up with demand. Ambulances and emergency vehicles sometimes find it hard to navigate the bumper-to-bumper traffic during rush hours. This can put seriously ill or injured people's lives at risk.
However, from the point of my view, cities have many benefits over villages for them. As a matter of fact, children growing up in small towns do not have as much access to education as children in cities. What's more, villages may not have enough children to create a school that goes all the way through high school. Cities on the other hand have multiple forms of education such as colleges and universities. Libraries and museums are available in cities. Meanwhile, entertainment is readily accessible in cities in the form of movie theaters, amusement parks and restaurants. More importantly, living in the city provides people with thousands of career choices.
Encouraging people to move to small towns is totally an unwise suggestion. Governments can further encourage the trend by funding education projects and ways to inform the populace about the costs of raising more than a set number of children. By using the carrot instead of the stick, people will be more inclined to choose to have smaller families.
Some people think governments should introduce laws assessing what nutrition and food choices to improve public health. Others think it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.有些人认为**应该颁布法律规定选择何种营养或者食物有利于健康，而另一些人不这么认为。请讨论双方的'观点并给出你自己的观点。
Some people think governments should introduce laws assessing what nutrition and food choices to improve public health. Others think it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Food is the paramount necessity of people. However, in recent years, we are appalled by the frequent outbreak of such incidents as milk powder adulterated with melamine, lean meat powder and a spate of food contamination cases. In response, a growing number of people call for the government to take decisive actions to tackle food safety hazards by introducing laws assessing food nutrition.
People in favor of such practice believe that customers have the right to find out everything about the food to make sure that what they eat is safe. If this information is transparent, then customers can feel free to choose the food they like without worring that this food can be harmful to their health. Besides, by keeping the information about the nutrition of food transparent, it can also discourage food producers from behaving irresponsibly for the food they make since it puts them under the scrutiny of customers. By this means, food producers will be more careful about the materials they add into the food.
Nevertheless, some people hold opposite views, believing that releasing such laws fails to solve the food safety issues at its core. They maintain that this law can only result in food producers fabricating their nutrition labels instead of truly reflecting ingredients in their food. What's worse, this cosmetic work can lead to the dereliction of duty by government officials since they may loosen their monitoring on the food with such nutrition labels.
In my opinion, it is necessary to issue laws assessing food nutrition since they can hold food producers accountable for what they make by putting them under the scrutiny of customers. However, releasing the law does not mean that law enforcement officials can sit back and relax. Without those people's efforts, laws can only be a piece of paper, having no actual effect. Therefore, it takes both the law and people's action in implementing the law to deliver tangible results in our efforts to ensure food safety.
nowaday,people constantly found themselve exposed variety of imformation, imformation is indeed nessasy to people's life.it bring great benefit to all of us.
their is no denying that information bring a great convinience to people.Sitting at home,all we have to do is to press the button,then we can lattest information about what peple;s life is like in other country.since we have internet ,we can research our information need only by doubling the mouse.it open the fantastic world to us.in our school library.we can check the catelogue of congress to the team paper for it.information has became an indispensable part of human being.without it,we would act like blind,and could not step forward.
Despite the positive infludence the information plays,their passive aspect cant be neglect.the young people are not support to variety of imformation.they dont have enought experience to tell good from bad or right from wrong.for examaple,books with much discription of violence and sex will tempt the children to fight and commit sex crime.
some tv programm are also contamination.there are a lot of pronolograghy things which bring bad impart on children.for instance.if a person on tv get what he or she want by stealing it.children maybe copy this behaviour.therefore,they gain the unacceptable values,which will be harmful to their further development.
To sum up,we should take action to control the increasing the neglected influence on the young people.for one thing.instruction and advise is nessasary to their education.young people who receive the proper instruction will be more likely to became the frendly social members.for another ,the strict law should be issued to keep them under control.i am sure,information will play more and more function in the future.
Nature or nurture, which one has major influence on our personality and development? This issue has been widely debated in our country nowadays. As far as I am concerned, I am inclined to support the standpoint that nurture plays a more crucial role in youngster’s development.
To begin with, scientific research has already proved that the intelligence quotient(IQ) we were born with is not differ from each other too much. We have to admit that the so-called whiz-kids could be found are actually seldom. If we want to lead to any success, we need to rely on postnatal education and self-struggle which are the decisive factors. For example, Edison was regarded as a fool in his primary school. However, he got uneaqualed achievement by his own efforts.
In the second place, children’s limited natural gift will disappear soon if his/her nurture can not support it sufficient. Only can we say that the advantageous intelligence is a helpful condition to achievement, but the advantages will not last for long. There is Chinese fable: a boy called zy had some talents in poetry, so his father continuous take him to attend feast to boast his gift instead of bringing him to school, several years latter, zy have not any intelligence in composing poems any more. Therefore, we can find how important does the parental education and studying environment are!
Finally, the concept for success given by Einstein also indicates the essential effect of education and hardworking. He said: success is equal to 99% of diligence plus only 1% of genius. From his notion, we can easily find that the diligence is the indispensable element for people’s accomplishments.
From all mentioned above, we can safely come to a conclusion that only education and industry can mould people to be excellent and outstanding, merely depend on
So-called nature gifts are absolutely deficiency.
Nowhere in the world has the issue of competition and cooperation been so much debated as in our society. Nowadays,the competition is more and more furious between different groups, but many people think that parents teach competition to children that it will be bad for their growth,let them learn how to cooperate that is the most important. Above point is certainly true; thisessay will outline three reasons.
The main reason is that children’ intellect is not enough capable to ***yze right and wrong competition. If children do not have correct teaching, the competition easily leads children to a wrong way. For instance, children usually pay attention to match their clothing and toys; in fact, it is really worth competing thing that their study is being ignored.
Another reason is that if children work together,they could easily find out and sup*** their gaps. Because of limit of age,in order to children’s knowledgeis limited so that they have the different strongpoint. When they work together, they can learn the merit from others, and quickly correct their mistakes.
Last but not the least reason is the cooperation means common progress. A people’s ability is limited, but group’s power is unlimited.Lots of things are really difficult to complete by personal power. Nevertheless, people work together to solve problems that will become really easy and simple. Thus, it is important to let children get to know signification of cooperation.
In conclusion, children ought to learn signification of cooperation and how to work together, in order to their better future.
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1、An important question facing us today is (1) 提出问题。 Some argue that (2) 观点 A. For example, (3) 举例说明观点 A. Again, (4) 进一步阐述观点 A. Opponents of this view say that (5) 观点 B. They claim that (6) 全面阐述 B. In my part, there are merits to both of these arguments. We should (7) 我们应该赞同 A 。At the same time, (8) 同时也不能忽视 B.
2、Nowadays almost everyone discusses about whether AAA is desirable. People’s views on it are different. Some people believe A. they argue that (1) 阐述观点 A. People who believe B, on the other hand ,argue that (2) 阐述观点 B. They maintain that (3) 进一步阐述观点B. There is certain some truth on both sides, yet neither provides a satisfactory answer. In my view, (4) 我的观点。We should (5) 进一步阐述我的观点。As such, (6) 这样做能带来的好处。
3、AAA is a question of controversy. People have different notions about the matter: some hold that (1) 观点 A. Others think (2) 观点 B. Therefore, I would like to have a look at the question in this essay. One of the strong points is that (3)AAA 的优势之一。Moreover, (4)AAA 的优势之二。In fact, (5) 举例说明。On the other hand, (6)AAA 的劣势之一。In addition, (7)AAA 的劣势之二。For example, (8) 举例说明。As shown above, I would like to say that (9) 总结我的观点。So, each case should be reviewed and concluded on the basis of facts.
4、People who support AAA hold that (1) 观点 A. Perhaps this is true, but it can not be denied that (2) 我提出反对意见。 I think it is important to take a glance at the argument on both sides. On one side ,people may have reasons to believe AAA. The most important reason is (3) 人们支持 AAA 的理由之一。In addition,(4) 人们支持 AAA 的理由之二。For instance, (5) 举例说明。Moreover, (6) 人们支持 AAA 的理由之三。On the other hand, people who attack AAA claim that (7) 观点 B. They also say that there will be problems of (8)AAA 带来的问题。 As far as I am concerned, I come to the notion that everything in the world has its own two sides. Generally, AAA is acceptable in some cases. However, problems do exist. We should take more efficient measures to avoid and minimize them.
5、Nowadays, (1) 题目中问题。However, this situation has raised controversy. Some people say that(2) 观点 A. They point out that (3) 进一步阐述观点 A. For example,(4) 举例说明。On the other hand, others say that (5) 观点 B. In my opinion, neither side is completely right. It is true that (6) 我的观点。For instance, (7) 举例说明。However, (8) 从反面来*衡我的观点。
One of the topics in daily life is whether or not the older people should live with their adult children. My answer is the question is that it is better for them not to.
Firstly, people of different ages have different ways of life. The old people like a quiet, peaceful and regular life whereas the young prefer noises, activities and unrestrained enjoyment. If they live together, old may feel that they are always disturbed and the young may feel that they are often handicapped.
Secondly, people of different generations have different views and values. What is quite normal to the parents may seem to be old-fashioned or wrong to the children. When they live together, they may disagree on *** ranging from minor domestic *** to national and international issues. Consequently, family life may be unpleasant or even unbearable to both the old and the young.
Last but not the least, adult children, like their parents, love independence and freedom, but their parents still take them as children and unintentionally interfere in their affairs. The situation will be worse if the adult children are already married. In this case, the children have already built a new and closed world and any outside interference may lead to conflicts.
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Businesses should hire employees for their entire lives.
Do you agree or disagree?
Model Answer:
I would have to completely disagree with the statement above. In the following paragraphs I will outline the basic concepts of my position.
First of all, I will least the major disadvantages for employers. On the today's market a company must be very flexible in order to compete with other firms. So, imagine the situation when a company can not fire its employees to stay on the market. It will lead to loosing not only a profit, but the clients, market share and competitive ability. Now, imagine the situation when a company is growing fast, everything is good and the next few years are going to be excellent. So, employers need more people to extend the production. However, nobody can tell what will happen in a few years. In this case, employers will be afraid to hire new people and extend their business because they will not be able to fire them if something goes wrong. Another important aspect of this is that a company can not have the best employees. It can not hire the better one without dismissing another employee.
What kind of disadvantages will have an employee in exchange for this kind of job security? First of all, it will be very difficult to find a job if one is not the best, because an employer does not want to spend money on one's education. Besides, employer will not have a chance to fire one if he does not do his job well. Second of all, employees with this kind of security tend not to perfect themselves because after they are hired they can not lose their job.
In conclusion, I would like to add that this statement has some positive aspects too such as constancy, a strong spirit of the company, etc. This system takes place in Japan and some companies succeeded in it. But I think that the reason of it subsists in the Japanese traditions, the particular cultural features, habits and customs. However, on today's market here in the United States a company can not afford to hire employees for their entire life.
雅思写作关于**类范文推荐
Most writers of fiction do not earn enough money to live from their writing.
Do you think the government should give them financial assistance to help encourage good literature?
Model Answer:
There are some conditions under which a novelist could reasonably expect some government support. In general terms, if the writer has already proved that he or she can write well, and if the stories produced are stimulating and interesting, then I consider that some financial help might be given.
Language quality is difficult to define, but if the writing shows, for example, good grammar, a wide vocabulary, and elegance and imagination, then I can see a valid reason for assisting an author to spend some time free from money problems. Such a writing needs to be encouraged. the entertainment value of a book would be also a factor in deciding whether to provide assistance to an author. Further consideration would include social and educational values expressed in the author's work.
However, if the ideas were socially irresponsible, or if the stories contain unnecessary violence or pornography for its own sake, then I would not want to see the author sponsored to write stories which do not benefit society. Other exceptions are the many writers of good books who do not require financial help. Books which proved to be extremely popular, such as the Harry Potter stories, clearly need no subsidy at all because the authors have become rich through their writing.
Views on what good quality writing means will vary widely, and so if any author is to be given money for writing, then the decision would have to be made by a committee or panel of judge. An individual opinion would certainly cause disagreement among the reading public.
1、Something we all cannot neglect as we get older is to accept the opinions of others. On the question whether it is better to CHOOSE A or CHOOSE B, I have long admitted that A has a strong argument. Privately ,however,(1) 提出自己的观点支持 B. I disagree with the above statement and support the superiority of B. Although(2)A 具备的优势。There is no evidence to suggest that (3)A 胜于 B. What’s more, (4)A 的一个缺点。It also has been said that (5)A 的第二个缺点。To be sure, (6) 支持 B 的一个理由。 Another thing why I dispute the statement above is that I am very sure that (7) 支持 B 的'另一个理由。For example, (8) 举例说明。In conclusion, A could never equal B (9)A 和 B 的比较，总结观点。
2、This controversy describes the dilemma faced by many people. As for me, I agree with the above statement that A is superior to B in DOING C. It is an obvious fact that (1) 赞同 A 比 B 好的第一个原因。For instance, (2) 举例说明。Another reason I should point out lies in the fact that (3) 赞同 A 比 B 好的第二个原因。In today’s world,(4) 举例说明。This may explain why A is better than B. on the other hand , a common sense goes that (5)B 的劣势之一。Moreover, (6)B 的劣势之二。To conclude,(7) 总结我的观点。
第一段(开头)
The issue of environmental protection has been in limelight recently. Some people maintain that protecting the environment is of considerable significance, but they take no actions. In this article, I intend to explore its causes and offer some possible measures.
第二段(分析原因)
本段内容概要：人们嫌麻烦，损害某些行业的.经济利益，人都自私推卸责任，人们的环保意识不强
The primary source of this problem is that environmental protection may bring some inconvenience to individuals’ daily life. In addition to this, efforts to protect the environment will probably damage the economic interests of some industries.Another contributing factor is that the selfishness dee*** rooted in human nature is likely to urge individuals to shirk this responsibility to others. Finally, citizens are not motivated to take actual actions for the sake of environmental protection.
第三段(解决方案)
本段内容概要：加大宣传以提高公民环保意识，制定相关法律来惩罚污染环境的行为
**应该给高污染企业提供补偿让他们关门
In order to overcome this problem, I believe we must strengthen our efforts to publicize the importance of environmental protection and thus promote citizens’ motivation to take actions. It is also necessary for us to enact relevant laws to punish the behaviors of polluting the environment. Another positive step would be toprovide those highly polluted industries with compensations for them to close down.
第四段(结尾)
In conclusion, I believe we must all recognize how serious this problem is.
For the sake of human existence on this planet, it is suggested that joint efforts across the border should be made to rescue the only homeland on which we have survived for millions of years.
——小骆驼续写作文 (菁华5篇)
骆驼妈妈带小骆驼旅游了之后，小骆驼心想：“没有想到，小红马说我的最难看的地方，原来是我最有用的地方，我应该到自豪才对呀！”
有一天，小骆驼又在小河边照镜子，又看到了小红马，对小红马说：“你说我的最丑的地方，是我最优秀的地方，你看我的两个肉疙瘩，叫驼峰，你比看丑其实里面装着许多营养，我在沙漠里带上好几天都不会饿，都亏这两个驼峰，还有我的又大又厚脚掌，在沙漠里不会陷阱沙子里，如果像你的脚掌，在沙漠里会陷阱沙子里，拔都拔不出来的，还有睫毛，在沙漠里一阵铺天盖地的沙尘暴，闭上眼睛，一点沙子都不会进的。你看我的最丑的地方，是我最有用的地方啊！你已有不要嘲笑我了！”小红马说：“我以后不会嘲笑你了，但是，你告诉我这些干吗？”小骆驼说：“我告诉你是你不要以貌取人，这样有的时候，一个人长得很丑，其实他的心灵很美。小红马你以后千万这样说了，可以吗？”小红马说：“好的你愿意跟我交朋友吗？”
小骆驼说：“愿意。”从此，小骆驼和小红马成了形影不离好朋友。可开心了！我明白了一个道理，无论一个人有多丑，但是心灵不丑。
妈妈带小骆驼在沙漠里旅游了一下，旅游完了，小骆驼心想：“原来，我最难看的地方，就是我最有用的地方啊！” 有一天，小骆驼又来到小河边照镜子，又看到了小红马。 小骆驼对小红马说：“你比看我的两个肉疙瘩，其实叫驼峰，我在沙漠里带好几天，都不会饿，因为我的驼峰里装着营养，够我好几天的营养了，还有我的脚掌，如果想你的脚掌一样，在沙漠里陷阱沙子里，怎么拔得出来呢？我的脚掌有我的用处，我的两层睫毛，在沙漠里，如果一阵铺天盖地的沙子来了，我闭上眼睛，会进不去一点沙子的，我的两个驼峰、又大又厚的脚掌、还有我的两层睫毛，不要看到太丑，其实他它很大作用哦！” 小红马说：“你告诉我这些干吗？我又不要，虽然这些非常有用，但是太丑了吧！” 小骆驼说：“这是有一点丑，但是很有用的，千万不要说丑，我不在乎但是有的时候你的一句话会伤害到某一个人，千万不要伤害到某一个人，要不然你的朋友会越来越来少的” 小红马有一点惭愧的说：“对不起，我不应该说这样的话，我以后会改掉，请你原谅我！” 小骆驼说：“只要你改掉这个毛病，误会原谅你的，我们叫个好朋友吧！” 小红马说：“好的！” 从此，小骆驼和小红马成了形影不离好朋友，过得开开心心的！
我明白了一个道理，就是无论一个人长得有多丑，都不要以貌取人，这样会伤害到人，所以我们不要以貌取人。
沙漠旅行结束了，有一天，小骆驼又在小河边照镜子，小红马看见了，便走过来对它说：“小骆驼，几天不见你怎么还是这么丑，我劝你还是去美容院整整容吧！整成我这样英俊潇洒、风流倜傥的容貌，那你就享福了！”小骆驼自豪地说：“你可别小瞧我呀！我的本领可是很大的`哦！”小红马用嘲笑的口吻说到：“你能有什么本领？你看，你的脚掌又大又厚，看看我的脚掌小巧玲珑，多可爱呀！你的背上有两个大肉疙瘩，多丑哇！我的背上**展展的，要多漂亮就有多漂亮。再看看你的睫毛，竟然有两层，真难看呀！我的睫毛只有一层，多美多迷人！”小骆驼连忙摆手说：“不是的，我的脚掌虽然很难看，但可以防止我陷进沙漠里。如果你来到沙漠里，我相信你走不了几步就会陷进沙子里，拔都拔不出来。我背上的两个肉疙瘩叫驼峰，我饿的时候，它会给我提供养料，我可以几天不吃不喝可都是它们的功劳呢！我的双层睫毛可以挡住风沙，刮风的时候，沙子就进不了我的眼睛啦！”小红马说：“哦，原来你的脚掌、驼峰和睫毛有那么大的作用，我当初不该嘲笑你，我明白了判断事物的丑美不能只看外表，要看实用不实用。”
从此，它们就成了形影不离的好朋友。
沙漠旅行结束了，小骆驼又见到了那匹小红马。小红马傲慢无礼地对小骆驼说：“你这个丑不拉几的家伙怎么又来啦？”“虽然我长得不美，但是我的脚掌、驼峰还有睫毛在沙漠里都能派上很大的用场呢！”小骆驼昂起头自豪的回答道。
小红马不信，问：“那你倒说说看有啥用场？”小骆驼说：“我的大脚掌能让我不陷进沙子里。”顿了一顿，它接着说：“我的驼峰里贮藏者丰富的养料，让我可以穿越沙漠不挨饿，我的睫毛还能抵挡风沙呢！”
小红马还是不太相信，便说：“是真是假，我们去沙漠里走一走就知道了。”小骆驼同意了。于是，它们走进了寸草不生的大沙漠。但是，小红马还没走上几步就陷进了沙子里。它费了九牛二虎之力，才勉强走了几步，小骆驼却已经轻松地走了很远；艰难地走了一阵子，小红马的肚子饿地咕咕叫了，可是它没有可以吃的养料，饿了整整一个下午，小骆驼却一点也不饿，照样走得很精神；在往回走的路上，忽然吹来一阵风沙，小红马赶紧闭上眼睛，结果还是满眼都是沙子，一点也看不见前面了。小骆驼同样闭上了眼睛，那双层的睫毛直接把沙子都挡在了外面，啥事儿都没有。
经历了这些事情，小红马发现了小骆驼的优点，也明白了一个道理：原来美不美不能只看外表，还要看看有没有用处，其实小骆驼也很美啊！
沙漠旅行结束了。一天，小骆驼又在小溪边照“镜子”，小红马看见了，又喷着响鼻，一脸讥笑地对小骆驼说：“喂，丑东西，长成这样还来照镜子，羞不羞啊？要面子就赶快回你的家去吧！”
小骆驼说：“你别看我长得丑，我丑得可有用哩！比如说我的脚掌，它在沙漠里能不陷进沙子，我的睫毛能挡住风沙，我背上的这两个叫驼峰，能贮存养料，我能三四天不吃东西不喝水。”
小红马一怔，暗想：他说的不会是真的吧？但如果是假的`呢？真是的，不如和他一起证明一下。
于是，小红马硬着头皮冲小骆驼喝道：“我才不信呢！有本事明天你和我一起去沙漠！”
第二天，他们来到大沙漠，小红马发现小骆驼在走，就嘲笑他：“笨蛋，这样走下去，要走到何年马月啊！”说着，就跑起来。结果，刚跑了两三步，他的腿就拔不出来了。小骆驼赶紧到他肚子底下，把他顶上背。突然，一阵风沙刮过来，小红马立刻满满一眼睛鼻子的沙，再看看秋毫无损的小骆驼，他惭愧了。过了一会儿，小红马觉得口干舌燥，饥饿难耐，他突然发现小骆驼的驼峰不丑，他甚至觉得自己也想要一对驼峰了。
从此，小红马再也不嘲笑别人了。
——写作小技巧 (菁华5篇)
一、作文要学会积累
“读书破万卷，下笔如有神”，“巧妇难为无米之炊”古人这些总结，从正反两方面说明了“积累”在写作中的重要性。“*时靠积累，考场凭发挥”，这是考场学子的共同体会。
（一）语言方面要建立“语汇库”。语汇是文章的细胞。广义的语汇，不仅指词、短语的总汇，还包括句子、句群。建立“语汇库”途径有二：第一是阅读。*时要广泛阅读书籍、报刊，并做好读书笔记，把一些优美的词语、句子、语段摘录在特定的本子上，也可以制作读书卡片上。第二是生活。*时要捕捉大众口语中鲜活的语言，并把这些语言记在随身带的小本子或卡片上，这样日积月累、集腋成裘，说话就能出口成章，作文就会妙笔生花。
（二）要加强材料方面的积累。材料是文章的血肉。许多学生由于*时不注意积累素材，每到作文时就去搜肠挂肚，或者胡编或者抄袭。解决这一问题的方法是积累素材。*时有条件的可带着摄像机、录音机、深入观察生活、积极参与生活，并与写生、、写日记、写观察笔记等形式，及时记录家庭生活、校园生活、社会
要把自己锻炼成一个目光敏锐永不罢休的观察家！——要把自己锻炼到观察简直成*惯，仿佛变成第二个天性。”把观察锻炼成*惯，锻炼成第二天性，这是一种很需要时间去磨练的功夫，是很有作用，很了不起的功夫。
要留心观察身边的人、事、景、物，从中猎取你作文时所需要的材料：你要对一些看似不大实则很有意义的事情产生兴趣，注意观察起因、过程和结果；你要留意校园花坛里的植物一年四季如何变化它的颜色，学会刨根问底，弄清这些变化的来龙去脉；你要走向社会，同更多的人接触，观察他们的一言一行，要思索一些东西，随时将它们汇入自己思想的长河。这就是观察的过程，观察过程中要注意以下几点：
（一）观察决不要仅仅局限于“用眼看”。广义的更有实际意义的观察是指要将人的五官全部调动起来：用耳朵去聆听，用身体去感受，更重要的是要用心、用脑去思索，这样的观察才会更加细腻、深刻。
（二）观察过程中要注意运用好“烂笔头”。俗语说得好：好记性不如烂笔头。好多同学每天看到的挺多，思索的也挺多，但是不善于随时记下来，这样就会
位，况且一篇文章只能有一个中心，与其“贪多嚼不烂”，不如集中笔墨表现一个中心，即使是通过数件事来表现中心，也要做到紧帖中心行文，目标始终如一，着墨于材料与中心的结合点，使材料蕴涵的力量全部直指中心。（三）立意要新颖
文章最忌随人后，人云亦云，新颖的角度是作文创新的核心。立意新颖要求跳出陈旧的框框、不按顺向思维、*惯思维或原有的心理定式进行立意构思，而是以独到的视角去审视题目中所蕴涵的另类内容，避开他人所常写，写别人所未写。即使同一写作对象，总是可以从许多角度切入，只要我们打破思维的定式，站在时代的高度，避“俗”求“异”，多角度、多侧面思考，或联想、或扩展、或类比、或逆向，发人之所未发，就能在五颜六色的天空里构筑属于你的最美的彩虹。
（四）立意要深刻。
立意的深刻是指确立的主题不是人所共知的肤浅的道理，而要透过现象看本质，挖掘出更深层的意蕴。
（五）立意要巧妙
在*作有限的文字内，要表现较为深刻的思想，就只能一粒沙里看世界，从生活中的一斑一点、一枝
读了一篇好文章，你一定很受感动吧？要是你想把这个故事简单的介绍给别人，就可以用缩写的形式。
缩写是作文中的一种常见形式。所谓缩写，就是在不改变中心，不改变体裁，保留原文的主要内容的情况下，把一篇长文章压缩成短文章。学会缩写，能帮助我们更好的理解课文内容，培养我们的阅读能力和概括能力，进而提高语言表达能力。那么，怎样进行缩写呢？
（一）要留主干、去枝叶。在缩写课文时，我们要删减次要的人物、次要的事件，以及说明、交代等地方，留下课文的主要内容。如《小抄写员》一文中我们首先要思考：叙利奥是在什么情况下开始帮爸爸工作的，他为什么要偷偷地做，怎样做的，结果怎样，把最使你感动的地方画下来。然后把帮爸爸抄写的事情经过写下来，而把当他被爸爸误解后是怎样想的等无关紧要的删除。
（二）要直接简化任务语言。在叙述中，我们要把直接叙述变成间接叙述，尽可能简化人物语言。这样，既使情节连贯，又使语句“简练”。
（三）要保持文章脉络清晰。缩写课文要注意保持文章主要脉络的清晰和完整，特别是
一、写作要求
考研英语小作文多是辞职信、道歉信、感谢信等应用文体。它的形式是给出提示要点，要求考生根据要求表达清楚要点。尽管它并不需要华丽的词藻和吸引阅卷人眼球的文采。但是，它还是需要考生在*时的复*中点滴积累，适当训练。以言简意赅的词句及一定的逻辑性，将事情叙述清楚，表意明确。
二、写作技巧
小作文满分为10分，因为其更加套路化，所以它比大作文更加容易得分。但是，得高分的前提是要在格式、语言和要点等方面下功夫。
1、格式
称呼：英语应用文称呼有这样的特点，如果是不认识的人，一般称呼为敬词+尊称。例如，DearSirorMadam；如果是写给关系正式的某团体或个人，称呼为敬词+尊称+名。例如，DearMr.xx或DearMs.xx；对于关系较亲密的人可以直呼其名。
正文：正文格式一般格式为首段开头空四个字母，段落之间不空行；现在流行的格式，每段开头不空格，但是各段之间空一行。考生在格式方面可以根据自己的*惯进行选择。只要让阅卷人看得舒服，且完全符合应用文要求的文体就可以。
2、语言
用词准确是最基础的要求之一。其次，句型多变。例如既有并列句，也有复合句，还有从句。注意语法运用要正确。
再者，正式语言一般是写给具有正式关系的团体或机构，注意这样的情况不用缩略语和口语用法。除了正式的文体以外，其他的文体皆为非正式文体。像写给朋友的书信等。
小作的考查要求中会体现出写该篇的目的和场合。考生在写作时要注意针对不同场合使用不同语言，使交流得以进行。另外，也要注意不同的应用文有不同的用语。建议你对某些应用文的格式和*惯用语，应该加以熟悉和背诵，以便运用自如。
3、其他要点
考试时注意在看到题目要求后不要忙于动笔。虽说小作文的字数充其量在一百多个单词，但是依旧要在脑子里理清思路。最好能够在仔细审题以后，认真列个提纲，这样更有利于思路清晰。写作时，注意表达清楚以下几个方面。首先交代清楚写信目的；其次为了让阅卷者对你的文章结构及表意一目了然，注意关联词或衔接词的运用；接下来，应该对个人的观点进行阐述（在写作有此必要的时候）。
最后，行文间要注意简化描述。用简短的语句代替冗长的语句。在作文完成的时候，应该检查、修改，以免遗漏一些需要表达清楚的要点和细节。
一、写作原则
（1）超前性。在论文选题前，要选择具有前瞻性的题目，即对我国职能部门制定有关方针、政策时有一定参考价值的论题。
（2）实用性。我们在做论文写作时切忌空谈，切忌重复已过时的东西，要选择工作中对企业有重大影响的现实问题展开讨论，并提出新的见解。
（3）时间性。特别提醒撰写会计方面论文的同学，由于20xx年*颁布了现行会计制度，因此，我们在进行论文写作时要注意参考20xx年以后刊物发表的文章。如：写会计信息失真方面的文章同学注意。自从现行制度颁布后，从制度层面已将会计信息造假问题杜绝了，建议这方面的论题就不要再选了。
（4）观点正确。论文写作时，其观点不要和国家的方针、政策规定相违背。
（5）论题要严格限定在会计、财务、审计和会计电算化方面；或写财务会计专业与其他学科交叉方面的论题。如：“税收筹划对企业理财活动的影响”等。其主旨必须体现出财务会计专业的内容，否则就离题了。
二、构思
1、选题
（1）不是所有刊物发表的题目都适合我们写。因为会计专业本科论文完成字数要求在8000至10000字之间，而有些发表的论文题目写作字数达不到我们规定字数要求，故并不适合我们选用。
（2）若写与会计专业实践相结合方面论文时，要突出所学财务会计专业理论与方法对实际工作的指导作用。离开这一指导作用，论文将变成调查报告或工作总结。
（3）要注意审题。有的同学为了追求题目新颖，确定题目时，出现了自相矛盾的情况。如：有的同学把题目定为“企业内部控制机制创新”。我们知道，对于企业内部控制问题有关部门没有出*整的规定，该题属于探讨性问题，更无从在此基础上创新了。
（4）论题要有探讨价值。论文的写作要以建立和完善相关规定或解决企业财务会计工作中面临的重大问题为对象，如：“浅谈我国的财务分布报告”。该题针对我国现行会计制度的相关规定不够完善的地方提出了切实可行的建设性意见，对职能部门进一步完善《企业财务分布报告》征求意见稿有一定参考价值。相反，有一些同学《关于会计人员职业道德》、《加强成本管理、提高企业经济效益》这类题目写起来很空，又没有实际内容。因此，建议同学们不要选择这些题目作为论文来写。
2、写作过程
一旦确定题目后，就要开始写作了，写作的时候要注意：
第一，确定题目；围绕题目搜集有关资料；第三，对相关资料进行筛选；第四，根据筛选后的资料确定论文提纲，在提纲中把自己的观点融入其中；第五，依据详细提纲开始论文写作。
同学们在收集资料时，可以到北京图书馆查找一下刊物：《会计研究》、《财务与会计》、《财务与会计导刊》、《财会通讯》、《财会月刊》、《*农业会计》、《现代会计》、《天津财会》等，还可以参考各财经院校学报有关财务会计方面的文章。
三、应注意的问题
（1）题目和内容要一致。如：有的同学在写“试论企业内部控制”一题时，夹杂了许多企业财务风险的控制与防范的内容，表现出题目与内容相脱节，从而消弱了主题。
（2）论文结构要严谨。论文提纲确定后，要看看其结构是否合理。举例说明：“试论审计风险的控制与防范”的一般结构应为：
审计风险的定义。进行各国审计风险定义比较，通过比较得出结论；审计风险的特征。对特征进行详细说明；审计风险产生的原因。对审计风险产生的原因进行逐项分析；审计风险的控制。主要把控制审计风险的步骤写出来；审计风险的防范。把防范的主要措施写出来。举例：例如，在防范审计风险方面，现行会计制度中那些不够规范的方面还需改进，怎样改进。国际上成功范例给我们的启示。
（3）文章内容要详略得当，重点突出。
（4）论文写作要能够反映出当前我国财务会计领域关注的问题，要看*几年的相关刊物。
（5）语言精炼，文笔流畅，标点正确。
1, 小作文的字数不够乃低级错误之最！
2 ， 尽量把字迹写工整，虽然字迹工整与否并不是评分标准范畴里的，但若你的英文写成了狂草书，考官也是会抓狂的！
3 ， 小作文不需要用太过于复杂的句式，能避免使用定语从句就不用，记住一句话：用最精辟的语言表达出最完整的信息！
4 ， 在小作文中放入插入语，伴随状语等形式能让你的文章更显精辟！
5 ， 小作文是客观性作文，所以你的文章中只能使用客观用词，不能出现 because 等主观性解释性的语句。
6 ，不要用一般现在时贯穿首尾，一般情况下小作文主要时态为过去时。此外，将来时不会出现在小作文中！
7 ，单词重复属于小作文写作中的大忌！在精辟的同时请选用多样化的词汇彰显你的学术范儿。
8 ， 大作文所占分值更多，所以若遇大作文比较难写，先干掉大作文！
9 ， 老外非常注重英文写作时候的逻辑，所以在你的小作文里请分段清楚，那最能体现你清晰的逻辑思路。
10 ， 熟练掌握小作文三大段框架，即开头介绍段，中间描述段和结尾总结段，这会让你的文章看起来更具有条理和整洁。
11 ，中间描述段要以便于对比为目的，从对比和类比，从不同属性的比较，从最具有代表性的数据入手等都是行之有效的分段方法。
12 ， 小作文写作最好有明确是时间分配，即准备阶段 3 分钟，写作阶段 15 分钟。严格遵循 18 分钟完成小作文的要求。绝对不能抢大作文的风头！
13 ， 绝对不能忽略对比，当你用完比较级，最高级后开始绞尽脑汁时，何不尝试一下从数据入手，从曲线本身入手，从总量对比入手使用分数，倍数，百分比等语法手段多方位多角度立体式轰炸呢？
14 ， 字数不能过多，字数过多只说明一个问题：你在描述 all features 而不是 main features ！
15 ，在确定好首段改写 introduction 以及末段总结后，从宏观出发，找到分段点。再确定 main features. 最后选定合适的词和句。层层递进，逐个击破！
16, 不要为了凑字数而写，在准备阶段最好在心中有数，设定好整篇文章可以用几个句子完成，以期达到精辟和有效，没用的信息只会让考官反感。
17 ，结尾段不要遗漏，相反，重申总结或通过中间段分析得出结论能提高你文章的整体层次感！
18 ，单词拼写错误是写作中最不划算的扣分项，请写完后迅速浏览自己文中的单词拼写问题。
一、写作原则
（1）超前性。在论文选题前，要选择具有前瞻性的题目，即对我国职能部门制定有关方针、政策时有一定参考价值的论题。
（2）实用性。我们在做论文写作时切忌空谈，切忌重复已过时的东西，要选择工作中对企业有重大影响的现实问题展开讨论，并提出新的见解。
（3）时间性。特别提醒撰写会计方面论文的同学，由于20xx年*颁布了现行会计制度，因此，我们在进行论文写作时要注意参考20xx年以后刊物发表的文章。如：写会计信息失真方面的文章同学注意。自从现行制度颁布后，从制度层面已将会计信息造假问题杜绝了，建议这方面的论题就不要再选了。
（4）观点正确。论文写作时，其观点不要和国家的方针、政策规定相违背。
（5）论题要严格限定在会计、财务、审计和会计电算化方面；或写财务会计专业与其他学科交叉方面的论题。如：“税收筹划对企业理财活动的影响”等。其主旨必须体现出财务会计专业的内容，否则就离题了。
二、构思
1、选题
（1）不是所有刊物发表的题目都适合我们写。因为会计专业本科论文完成字数要求在8000至10000字之间，而有些发表的论文题目写作字数达不到我们规定字数要求，故并不适合我们选用。
（2）若写与会计专业实践相结合方面论文时，要突出所学财务会计专业理论与方法对实际工作的指导作用。离开这一指导作用，论文将变成调查报告或工作总结。
（3）要注意审题。有的同学为了追求题目新颖，确定题目时，出现了自相矛盾的情况。如：有的同学把题目定为“企业内部控制机制创新”。我们知道，对于企业内部控制问题有关部门没有出*整的规定，该题属于探讨性问题，更无从在此基础上创新了。
（4）论题要有探讨价值。论文的写作要以建立和完善相关规定或解决企业财务会计工作中面临的重大问题为对象，如：“浅谈我国的财务分布报告”。该题针对我国现行会计制度的相关规定不够完善的地方提出了切实可行的建设性意见，对职能部门进一步完善《企业财务分布报告》征求意见稿有一定参考价值。相反，有一些同学《关于会计人员职业道德》、《加强成本管理、提高企业经济效益》这类题目写起来很空，又没有实际内容。因此，建议同学们不要选择这些题目作为论文来写。
2、写作过程
一旦确定题目后，就要开始写作了，写作的时候要注意：
第一，确定题目；围绕题目搜集有关资料；第三，对相关资料进行筛选；第四，根据筛选后的资料确定论文提纲，在提纲中把自己的观点融入其中；第五，依据详细提纲开始论文写作。
同学们在收集资料时，可以到北京图书馆查找一下刊物：《会计研究》、《财务与会计》、《财务与会计导刊》、《财会通讯》、《财会月刊》、《*农业会计》、《现代会计》、《天津财会》等，还可以参考各财经院校学报有关财务会计方面的文章。
三、应注意的问题
（1）题目和内容要一致。如：有的同学在写“试论企业内部控制”一题时，夹杂了许多企业财务风险的控制与防范的.内容，表现出题目与内容相脱节，从而消弱了主题。
（2）论文结构要严谨。论文提纲确定后，要看看其结构是否合理。举例说明：“试论审计风险的控制与防范”的一般结构应为：
审计风险的定义。进行各国审计风险定义比较，通过比较得出结论；审计风险的特征。对特征进行详细说明；审计风险产生的原因。对审计风险产生的原因进行逐项分析；审计风险的控制。主要把控制审计风险的步骤写出来；审计风险的防范。把防范的主要措施写出来。举例：例如，在防范审计风险方面，现行会计制度中那些不够规范的方面还需改进，怎样改进。国际上成功范例给我们的启示。
（3）文章内容要详略得当，重点突出。
（4）论文写作要能够反映出当前我国财务会计领域关注的问题，要看*几年的相关刊物。
（5）语言精炼，文笔流畅，标点正确。
——雅思老师岗位职责优选【5】份
1.负责学生托福/雅思/SAT/ACT单科科目的教学，承担一对一或一对多小班课程;
2.对学员的`学*有规划、有计划，按时进行课堂反馈、保持和学员的学术沟通;
3.对学员的作业有检查、模考有分析;
岗位职责:
1. 讲授雅思相关科目的公益课直播课及收费课。
2. 参与雅思内容教研及课程研发等。
3. 进行学员的辅导和答疑,对学员负责,保障教学任务的`完成;
4. 参与线下宣传推广讲座。
5. 进行新教师培训。
6. 配合运营市场部等其他工作。
7. 要求每天三天坐班。
职位要求
1、 有至少三年雅思教学经验,有直播课教授经验者更佳。
2、英语口语发音标准,口齿清晰、表达流利,形象气质佳。
3、教学功底扎实,沟通能力和逻辑思维能力强,有责任心。
4、对工作充满热情、善于调动课堂气氛。
岗位职责:
1.负责雅思、新托福课程的教学;
2.对雅思、新托福最新的发展趋势进行研究,总结科学有效的应对体系,用学生容易接受的方法进行教学;
3.不断对学生的.学*成果进行调查,以改进教学过程;
4.与学校其他部门保持联络沟通确保教学项目的顺利进行和成功完成;
5.完成上级交办的其他工作任务。
任职要求:
1.英语相关专业本科及以上,英语专业八级及以上,雅思7.5+、托福95+,优先考虑;
2.两年以上教师工作或英语培训行业授课背景,有雅思教学经验者优先;
3.有扎实的英文功底,熟悉雅思、托福考试,听说读写流畅;
4.熟悉并有雅思、托福等相关考试经验者,有海外学*和工作经历者优先;
5.具有较强的课堂表现力和控制力,善于用个人方法调动学生的积极性,有公众演讲经验及强烈表达欲望;
6.热爱教学,对学生认真负责,具有人格魅力,具备良好的团队精神,一定的组织能力,进取心强。
岗位职责：
1、根据课程体系、教学大纲，开展教学工作；
2、雅思/托福学术研究工作（教学法的学*和研究）；
3、雅思/托福课程及教材的研发工作（参与教材的'编写和教学资料的收集与整理）；
4、遵守教务部管理制度，服从上级安排的其他工作。
任职要求：
1、国内学历―英语专业本科以上，英语专业八级或同等英语水*，口语流利；海外留学―本科以上；
2、取得雅思7分以上者优先；
3、有一年以上英语教学经验、有雅思教学经验者优先；
4、有个人魅力，具有较强的幽默感和感染力，善于调动课堂气氛有深厚英语知识；
5、能够承担工作压力，适应有强度的工作。
岗位职责：
1、对英语教学充满热情，熟悉雅思，托福，SAT，AP，GRE等出国类考试方法；
2、有良好的听说读写能力；
3、熟悉教学项目中的一个或多个模块；
4、优秀的`教学和沟通能力，可帮助参训学员快速提升学*效果；
任职要求：
1、学历：本科及以上学历；
2、知识：英语专业八级，参加过雅思、托福、SAT、GRE等考试者及海外留学归国者优先；
3、能力：口齿清楚，英语发音标准，良好的沟通和交流能力；
4、技能：多样的教学手段和教学技巧，有较强的课堂控制能力和感染力；善于解析教学材料，提炼要点并形成教学课件；
5、素养：认真负责，良好的职业操守；
——雅思写作考试真题实用五份
The diagram gives a breakdown about different attitudes among undergraduate and postgraduate students towards equipments of a UK college in 2004.
While being questioned about the contentment of study facilities, two groups of students (both graduate and undergraduate) seemed to share the same point of view, where approximately[w/v] 85% of both students (two thirds of them showed their thorough support) expressed their satisfaction, leaving only around 15% students feeling in an [wv]opposite way.
However, divergence emerged among college students and students who were after Master’s Degree when it came to questions about the school catering service and social establishment. The majority of university undergraduates (97%) favored the college canteen, whereas 16% of postgraduates, 13% higher than their university counterparts, showed their reluctance. On the contrary, undergraduates appeared to be more complaining about social facilities, with 30% students announcing their dissatisfaction which exceeded the proportion of criticism within graduate students by 25%.
Overall speaking, most of the UK college students had a high comment on the campus appliance, yet undergraduates tended to be relatively harsher than graduate students.
Some people say that older people should live with their adult children. Others say that they shouldnt. Which do you think is good practice.
One of the topics in daily life is whether or not the older people should live with their adult children. My answer is the question is that it is better for them not to.
Firstly, people of different ages have different ways of life. The old people like a quiet, peaceful and regular life whereas the young prefer noises, activities and unrestrained enjoyment. If they live together, old may feel that they are always disturbed and the young may feel that they are often handicapped.
Secondly, people of different generations have different views and values. What is quite normal to the parents may seem to be old-fashioned or wrong to the children. When they live together, they may disagree on *** ranging from minor domestic *** to national and international issues. Consequently, family life may be unpleasant or even unbearable to both the old and the young.
Last but not the least, adult children, like their parents, love independence and freedom, but their parents still take them as children and unintentionally interfere in their affairs. The situation will be worse if the adult children are already married. In this case, the children have already built a new and closed world and any outside interference may lead to conflicts.
Some people believe that students who want to go to university after graduation from high school should have about one years time to get a job to obtain work experience or have a travel to enlarge their vision.
Do you agree or disagree? What is your opinion?
High school students who intend to study at university should attend tertiary education after graduation. To spend one years time doing a job to acquire work experience or to travel for broadening ones vision is, to my mind, a waste of time and energy.
First, university education is the continuation of high school education for those students who want to pursue their learning at an advanced level. A break of one year from academic study will probably weaken ones memory of what has been learned, especially for those who will study such theoretical subjects as mathematics, physics or chemistry.
Besides, many nations have established one examination that all students must pass to qualify for admission to a university. For example, in China there is a college entrance examination. Anyone who fails in the examination will be denied of admission into a university.
Furthermore, one years work or travel does not help students much in their academic studies at university because it is unpredictable for ones work experience to be integrated into ones studies of specific subjects, to say nothing of traveling experience. Even if some subjects, such as MBA, require students to have work experience, one years work experience, however, is not sufficient to meet the requirements of three or five years, and ones work experience should, after all, be related to management.
There is no doubt that helping students find a job is one of the primary functions of university education， but universities do exist for other purposes such as improving students’ ***ytical skills and raising students’ moral standards.
A university education can be seen as a process of improving students’ ***ytical thinking. The variety of courses offered at university inspires students in various ways，therefore improving their ***ytical ability. For example， science courses such as math and biology help students develop a rational way of thinking whereas arts courses such as literature may let students ponder over issues from a logical， multi- dimensional perspective; and courses in social sciences force students to recognize the ideas that have been traditionally assumed to be acceptable and unproblematic.
With the development of these types of ***ytical thinking， graduates can face future challenges with more confidence and enthusiasm.
Also， university education is expected to improve students’ moral standards. This is rooted in universities’ belief that students’ awareness of responsibility towards their community and their country is of high importance. In this ever-degree rating society and civilization， students are encouraged actively participate in improving the local community. A university that provides care and facilities for physically disadvantaged students may inspire the graduates to better handle situations in the future where they may have to interact with the disabled community. A successful university education is supposed to produce morally sound graduates， therefore increasing their employability.
In conclusion， university education not only helps students locate a decent job but will also develop other qualities such as enhancing their ***ytical skills and cultivating their hunger and spirit for life.
Some people warn that the era of the silver screen is coming to an end and that people will eventually lose interest in going to the cinema.
Do you agree or disagree with this view?
The need for preschool education to assist young children to prepare well for primary schools is widely acknowledged by an increasing number of parents. Some believe that nursery schools have the potential to provide a concrete foundation before starting formal education, while others argue that staying with the families is more beneficial.
To begin with, going to nursery school provides young children more opportunities to interact with different people, especially those of similar ages. It is apparent that kindergartens in a community accommodate children who are from different families and they are looked after on a group basis. For example, a report conducted by sociologists statistically proves that young children who are educated in preschools, normally perform better and show less anxiety to strangers when they meet with other people in later schooling.
Further, children who enter kindergartens have better ability of using their language. The reason is that young children tend to speak and communicate with friends more often than those who remain at home, and meanwhile, some pre-schools even start a second language education at a very early stage as three to seven years of age is the prime time for language learning.
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失而复得的友谊更值得珍惜！——题记
我和陈明是好朋友，我们一起在手工组上课。有一天，我们俩把在手工课上的小木船拿出来玩。陈明在看我的小木船时，一不留神把我的小木船摔坏了。更不幸的是，他又下意识的往后退了几步，把我的小木船给踩得四分五裂，真是惨不忍睹。我愣了一下，缓过神来，顿时怒中火烧，第一反应就是拿起了他的小木船，猛地摔到地上，又用脚用力地踩了几下，甩下一句话：“以其人之道还治其人之身”便扬长而去。从此以后，我和陈明的关系算是彻底破灭了！以后，我们互相见面连招呼都不打，放学后回家的伙伴总是少了陈明一个人。慢慢地我开始反省自己：我的小木船坏了是陈明的不小心，可是他的小木船却是我故意弄坏的。想到这里我后悔了，后悔自己的莽撞和不理解别人。我很想挽回这种局面，但是每当我想起我那受伤的小木船，还有抹不开的面子，我就没有主动去向他道歉。
有一天晚上，我正在写作业，突然听见一阵急促的敲门声，我小跑着去开门。开门后，我惊讶极了，竟然是陈明！他低着头，手上托着一艘精致的小木船。我疑惑地问：“什么事啊？”“我……我……下个月就要转学了。”什么？转学？我的心扑腾一跳。他接着说：“以前的事情求你原谅，这是我亲手做的小木船，请你保管好吧！”此时，我的眼眶里湿润了……我们又聊了一会儿，并留下了我们之间的电话和地址，我们答应在电话里见！从这以后，我和陈明虽然分隔两地，但是我们的友情却更真挚了。
我把这艘小木船摆在我的书桌上。每当我看着这只小木船，我就会想起曾经发生的一切！它让我学会了珍惜，更加珍惜这失而复得的友情。
我和陈明是好朋友。一天，我们把在手工小子做的小木船拿出来玩，陈明一不小心把我的摔坏了。争执中，陈明又把它踩坏了，我非常生气，一把夺过他的小木船重重地摔在地上，接着双脚一前一后“落”在他的小木船上，踩完后，我很生气得对他说：“好了，我们两清了。所以以后我们就不再是好朋友了！”在我转身回家的前几秒内，我清楚地看见，陈明那怒目圆睁的脸上流下几滴晶莹的东西。
傍晚，妈妈把我最喜欢吃的饭都做了一遍，但我的气还没有消，没胃口，所以吃不下，妈妈见情况不对，就对我说：“小刚，怎么了？”终于有个能谈心的人，我就把事情的来龙去脉、一肚子的委屈告诉了妈妈，妈妈却说：“其实这件事你的错误最大，如果不是你又把小明的小木船摔坏，你们各自也都不会那么生气，所以你应该向他道歉。”妈妈又语重心长的对我说：“你想一想，小木船坏了还可以修，可你们的友谊破碎了，就很难再“修”好了呀……”晚上，我躺在床上，想着我和陈明以前度过的美好的时光，又想起妈妈的话，悔恨的眼泪就顺着面颊流了下来。
第二天。我想到陈明的座位那儿去给他道歉，可我却没有这个勇气，我慢腾腾的从座位上站起来，但这时陈明已来到我的座位旁，支支吾吾的对我说：“王刚……我们……我们……我们和好吧……昨天……昨天是我不对……我向你道歉……对不起……”听了陈明的话，我便充满勇气地对他说：“其实，错误最大，应该是我向你说：对不起！”
“没关系！”
“没关系！”
“哈哈哈哈！”
“哈哈哈哈！”
从此，我和陈明的关系比以往更好了，我们班里也多出了一对形影不离的铁哥们。
我和陈明是个好朋友，有一天，我们把在手工小组做的小木船拿出来玩，陈明一不小心把我精心制作的小木船摔坏了。我们扭打起来，争执中，陈明又把小木船踩坏了，我的劳动成果遭到破坏，很生气，一把夺过陈明制作的精致小巧的小木船
声叫道:“你踩坏了我的船，怎么办?这小木可是我用辛勤的汗水和智慧的结晶拼凑而成的，现在被你摔坏了，你赔!”说到这儿我的眼眶里溢出了滚烫的、晶莹的泪水，不听使唤的一滴一滴的顺着颧骨往下流。“这管我什么事?就算是我摔坏的其中也有你的责任!再说是你把我撞倒的、切，我就不赔!”他也急的脸红脖子粗。就在执陷入了僵局的时候，许老师走进教室看到了我和陈明哭丧这脸我和陈明你说一句我说一句，吵得唾沫横飞，丝毫没有想退一步时，便大步走上前一手扒开我和陈明，大声叱喝道:“有什么事不能坐下来说吗?难道非要以武力来解决问题吗?”老师的严厉的批评是使我和陈明陷入了沉思。片刻过后老师又用温柔*和的语气对我们说:“两个小笨蛋，你们想呀，这样的解决方式不但不能解决根本上的问题，还伤了朋友之间纯洁的友谊，你们说这值吗?”“不值”我和陈明你望望我，我望望你异口同声的答到。
我和陈明是好朋友。一天，我们把在手工小组做的小木船拿出来玩，陈明不小心把我的摔坏了。争执中，陈明又把它踩坏了。我非常生气，一把夺过他的小木船，用力摔到地上，然后用脚踩得粉碎，瞪了他一眼，头也不回的走进教室，陈明也跑进了教室。
自从这次风波过后，我和陈明的友情从此破碎。我们每次见面都假装不认识对方，虽然我们两个除了对方都还有很多朋友，可缺了一个的朋友，每次玩都有一种隐隐约约但着实存在的失落感，就这样，我们谁也不理对方，谁又都想和对方和好，却不好意思说。几个星期的时间转瞬即逝，我觉得这样下去也不是办法，就在晚上做了一个精致的小木船，准备第二天早晨送给陈明和他和好如初。在上学的路上，我们相遇了，我急忙对陈明说：“对不——”“对不起，是我的错……看，我昨天晚上又做了一个小木船，送给你！”他打断了我的话，从鼓鼓的衣兜里那出了他做的小木船。“嘿嘿！”我好像找回了当初的感觉。“你抢了我的台词哟！”说着我也从兜里拿出了我做的小木船，我们像一对新人交换戒指一样交换小木船，然后拥抱在一起，拉着手走向学校……
行驶在碧水上的小木船，对于我和陈明来说，它不仅仅是小木船，它更是我们俩友谊的见证，我和陈明会永远珍藏、保护小木船，我们的友谊也会永恒！
一只只小木船，载着我们的友谊，悠悠忽忽，驶向那片碧水的尽头……
我和陈明是好朋友。一天，我们把在手工小组做的小木船拿出来玩，陈明一不小心把我的摔坏了。争执之中，陈明又把它踩坏了，我非常生气，说:“你要为此付出代价!”然后一把夺过他的小木船，把它摔在地上，又狠狠地踩了几脚，小木船被我踩得粉身碎骨。我看也不看，气冲冲地走出了教室。
在回家的路上，我仔细思索着这件事情，越想越觉得对不起陈明。回到家，我看见爸爸正在沙发上看电视，我连忙跑过去，把事情讲了一遍，问:“爸爸，你说我该怎么办呢?”爸爸想了想说:“这样吧，你重新做一个小木船还给他吧，然后再道个歉，你们两个不还是好朋友吗?”我一拍脑袋:“对啊!我怎么没有想到。”
我准备好了材料，认认真真地又做了一个小木船，还给它上了色，新的小木船明显要比旧的小木船精致、漂亮。第二天早上，我带着小木船来到了学校，找到了陈明的桌子，把小木船和一张写着:对不起，那天是我的错，我们和好吧。的纸条放进陈明的抽屉里。
做完了这些，我回到座位，放下书包，突然发现抽屉里有一只小木船和一张纸条，上面同样写着:对不起，那天是我错了，这是我重写做的小木船，我们和好吧。就这样，我们又成为了好朋友。
现在，每当我看到书桌上陈明做的小木船，都会想起这件事情，都会想起我们的友谊，希望小木船能成为我们友谊的见证!
